This is a sample post to further explain how getting critiques works.
- Name/ Pseudonyme of author having requested critiques.
- Link to the original location of the author's work
- If the author has chosen to describe their work, a description will appear here:
Description.
- The sample author has chosen a text. It will appear here:
Maya was a little girl walking down the path of a deep forest. There where cypresses along the road which she skipped along joyously. There wasn't much to do around her grandmother's besides walk the forest path. She would pretend there were monsters and wolves in the darkness, they would jump out and scare her. Then, she would remove the kitchen knife from her pocket and pretend to stab them. It was thrilling. But, she was always home by nightfall.
This, Maya had remembered forever. She was dead now. Once, a real monster had attacked her. A monster disguised as a man. He had used an unloaded gun, which he'd tried to hit her with. She had stabbed him in the head: a fatal blow. Afterwards, she'd gone home, eaten her macaroni and cheese, and died of untreated apendicitis.
- Additional information about the author such as their website, blog or more work is placed below:
Information.
- A critique by Stick Men Creation- the website will offer constructive feedback for the piece.
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